Kayla R and Brandon R
I’m so impressed by the richness and subtlety of Kayla and Brandon’s writing. What a fascinating little poem! The picture adds a lot, too.
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Rebellious and emotional! Abstract yet organized brilliantly. Good job.
Posted May 12, 2006, 4:42 pmI think that the picture makes the poem look really good!It is a very good poem,too!
Posted May 12, 2006, 8:09 pmI like the words. Those add a lot to the picture.
Posted May 13, 2006, 4:12 pmThat is definitely the coolest thing I’ver seen on here. It’s like a mini-mystery, one of those Ralph Steadman random things…:)
Posted May 15, 2006, 12:52 pmThis poem is very good considering this project was pretty difficult. We had to create a poem by cutting out words in a newspaper. Yeah, it’s harder than you think… This poem really says something to me, like how love can seem so harsh and rough. I enjoyed it very much, nice work.
Posted May 16, 2006, 12:18 amThe heart reminds me of a CD cover, maybe “The Used”? Your words are very powerful. I agree with the first comment; it’s rebellious and a bit angry.
Posted May 16, 2006, 3:32 pmWe like how you drew the heart. it looks awesome.
Posted May 18, 2006, 3:37 pmAwesome–kind of haunting…
Posted May 22, 2006, 1:11 pmthis is so kool! i luv this poem and how the words from a newspaper is very neat. actually, i really really like the background color; it makes the heart POP!!!!!!! this is one of my favorite things on per.spec.tive!
-Cecilia B:)
Posted February 11, 2007, 3:21 pm