Lauren M.
Dont’ be fooled by this poem’s small size–it packs an extra-large helping of sweet into just a few words. Nice use of figurative language, Lauren!
Melody in the Wind
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This is a very GOOD poem, i like it.
Posted May 4, 2006, 10:01 amI think the poem has great personification. It is very interesting because it makes you very calm while reading. It is like listening to the ocean. Good use of a band instrument, and great way to describe what it sounds like!
Posted May 5, 2006, 12:41 pmI enjoyed your poem!! I really like your style of writing!
Posted May 5, 2006, 2:35 pmWhat I like is that you don’t really know what the sound is until the very end. Nice job, Lauren!
Posted May 8, 2006, 2:28 pmI love that poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was so-o-o-o-o pretty.
Posted May 9, 2006, 2:50 pmGreat imagery.
Posted May 10, 2006, 10:49 amVery creative words you put in your poem!! I love it!!!
Posted May 22, 2006, 7:44 pmLauren, this is a lovely poem. Excellent use of figurative language. I am very impressed. I would love to see more of your work on Perspective.
Posted May 25, 2006, 10:35 pm